Thursday, August 20, 2020
Animation reading.-_-
Walt: For these past 2 weeks we have been reading A Piece Of Paradise and our create task was to identify the moral of the story and create an animation to teach this moral to the junior students.
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hi Devon this is me kamyar. i like how you had dose mini mini characters it was very cool and i like how you had a background and i like how you had those text box near your characters maybe you can have a more better beginning.
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kai ora devon its me blakew how long did you make this animatoin?
ReplyDeletei like how you added the walt and the kids were playing tag then the clouds and sun said look t them kids playin in our crops then they started aurguing who grew them next time you should add a bit more detail and pancuatoin from blake w <a href="htlps://(click here to see my blog)
hi Devon its me Zia i liked how you made your create task so detailed it is very cool and l liked how you made it moved very cool maybe next time you should not make very big steps when you were moving the characters besides that it is very good keep it up.
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Hi Devon,
ReplyDeleteGreat effort on describing what your task was. You have shown what the story you read was about and what the moral of the story is as well. I wonder if you and your brother get along well or fight like the sun and rain! I'm sure the junior school would appreciate your animation - be sure to let the teachers know :)
My suggestion is that you make the writing larger or bolder so that they stand out. The message you have in your animation is very important and we don't want to miss it!
I look forward to seeing your Reading work for this week. Tu meke!