One morning I woke up in an old cave near a calm turquoise lake.The sun was just rising. It was very very cold. I could see vines, wet dirt and big rocks with a beautiful mountain in the background called mount ever last. I heard lovely singing of the birds and the water slapping against the dirt also the sound of my shoes standing on the rocks with pebbles coming off the wall. I smelt the lovely smell of fresh air and the smell of the lake. When I sat down I could touch the wet dirt and the cold slippery vines with the solid wet rocks under me. When i sat down i felt relieved and relaxed.Thursday, August 13, 2020
Setting:One Old Cave
One morning I woke up in an old cave near a calm turquoise lake.The sun was just rising. It was very very cold. I could see vines, wet dirt and big rocks with a beautiful mountain in the background called mount ever last. I heard lovely singing of the birds and the water slapping against the dirt also the sound of my shoes standing on the rocks with pebbles coming off the wall. I smelt the lovely smell of fresh air and the smell of the lake. When I sat down I could touch the wet dirt and the cold slippery vines with the solid wet rocks under me. When i sat down i felt relieved and relaxed.
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Hi devon its blakw
ReplyDeletei like how you did that photo im doing a smiler you cauld add a setting of the characters and who or what happeing and is there a fish or are you there??