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Thursday, May 27, 2021

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Walt Use Prior Knowlodge When making text-to-text connections Title- Hungry Wave Characters- Ana, Mafui’e, Sina, Mika, Mamma, Niko Setting- Village, School, Beach Anas mum was getting the kids ready for school and mum giving ana a bun in her hair until there was huge earthquake and everybody was screaming in the village then when the ground was still they went to school and they saw the ocean moving they thought it was a really big wave Niko grabbed anas hand and started running to a mountain she got stuck but niko grabbed anas bun and saved her all of the peoples house in the village was broken down and destroyed
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3 comments:

  1. EliseMay 28, 2021 at 10:23 AM

    Hi Devon.
    Your reading work is Amazing
    I like how you Did your first create task by copy and pasting it Because not much people did.
    Maybe next time you change the background because i dont think its really necessary for a Tsunami Blog post.
    Kind regards Elise

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  2. AdeleJune 1, 2021 at 10:30 AM

    Hi Devon, Awesome blog post! I just noticed in your blog description there are no full stops - next time can you use some full stops. I like your poster, there is a lot of valuable information & I think Elise has made a good suggestion by putting a Tsunami picture for the background. Keep up the good work!

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  3. Lucy FergusonJune 1, 2021 at 12:25 PM

    Hi Devon, I like the presentation of your blog post... however is it on task? I think it really hooks the reader in.... BUTTTTT your text isn't about rugby. Next time I think you could add a cool gif around a tsunami instead?

    You have included a lot of valuable information around what to do incase there is a tsunami. I look forward to your next post.

    Miss F :)

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